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this was my first flash which i made about a year ago with a friend for a science project. it's about enzymes so enjoy...
First off, FIX THE DAMN AUDIO! I mean come on is it that hard to put your voice a little closer? What about that one guy that put it too close and was loud as hell, and the Ahh was unnessary i didn't watch it all it bored me to death..Fix your audio and work on graphic and you'll be good to go :).
Your lack of skill is saddening... :(
On the brighter side you have lots of room for improvement!
I didn't like it
The animation was poor, and well... the music sounded idiotic in the backround. The voice acting was just so damned irritating and well, it made me induce vomit.
Halfway through the sound become horribly timed, and the animation didn't match it at all.
It was just... garbage. I'm sure you got decent marks in your science class for creativity but... I didn't learn anything on this shitty field trip.
The voices were seriously distorted and hard to understand. Trying to hear them over ... who was that, Whitesnake? ... didn't help matters any, either.
Intro: Seemed to drag on for way too long The Sherman & Mr. Peabody cameo might have been a bright spot if only I could have understood what the heck anyone was actually saying.
Enzyme action: Meh. Close enough for grade school. I'll give you a break on this one.
Text portion: AAAH IT BURNS IT BURNS! I had to stop watching here because the spelling errors were making my brain bleed. You did this as a school project, and you didn't check your spelling??
Overall: nice update of the "clear plastic binder" approach (the rumor when I was in school was that putting your report in a fancy binder would raise your grade by at least a +/- mark, because, hey, it HAD to be good if it was in a BINDER).
Oh man, come on! Enzymes are interesting things, but this is totally messed up everything. The voices are hard to understand, too.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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