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We tried to get the voice recordings to be better in this episode. There is less muffles, but the voices aren't all evenly levelled. Sorry about that. We also tried to make it lag a bit less.
((( IT WAS COOL )))
This was cool, kept me interested, and as i have not seen the other one the voices did seem ok, and about "LAG" that could be because there is alot of stuff going on, maybe even the fine details in the art, and i must say the artwork was really impressive i was pleased with the outcome, nice job...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower file if you can, and make more episodes maybe not as big though...
A good flash, nice art detail and overal fun to watch...
i <3 mmm 2!!
omfg awsome GIT-R-DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Eu gostei muito dessa animação principalmente das faces q os personagens fazem... parabéns!!
a few small adjustments would mhelp a lot
Things done well:
the voices and the personalities, the graphic style (anime-esk style works well for communicating your characters and their emotions)
Things that could have been improved:
At the end of each voice clip when the microphone stops recording it makes a sound and although that sound wasn't loud it detracted from the movie significantly (it shouldn't be difficult to fix).
By removing unimportant lines the animation would flow better (most people prefer an animation that is short and sweet to one that drags on, in my opinion flow is the most important part of an animation).
Add to the plot, I wanted to see a bit more struggle with either the bordom or the shopping because the lack of significant struggle makes your plot seem a bit like friends randomly fooling around.
I do not mean to sound too critical but I really see potential in you animations and I look forward to seeing more.
it was a pretty good flash but...
in my oppinion the humor is a little played out to me because i go to school with kids that are immature like that. and act the same way. it just isnt funny to me anymore
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