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Sep 8, 2005 | 4:27 PM EDT
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eschew obfuscation, i say, eschew!

Reviews


PolycronicsPolycronics

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Decent animation, stale dialogue, failed punchline

You animation is good, your art is okay. I don't like the clash between the pseudorealistic people and cartoon-y animals, but that's really just me.
The power tie was funny, but beyond that the humor in this was terrible. Not knowing names, smooth talking about something completely off subject, and incorrect spanish COULD be funny things, but the delivery here didn't do a thing with them.
Also, your main character has a raspy voice, an accent, and talks fast. While I heard and understood everything he said, I don't think that these things helped him any. It made him harder to hear, and I think the reason for his lines falling through may have been because of this. Learn to utilize your ideas a little better and these could be solid cartoons.



shadowfox1shadowfox1

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Not something I'll watch again.

This cartoon is too weird for me. I can't really understand it.



ZaxterionZaxterion

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

What was that?!?!?

That was completely pointless and meaningless. I stared at the screen while hearing my brain cells crying out for some rubber cement to sniff just so they would die and not have to suffer throught the movie. Just a suggestion, next time you make an animation, ACTUALLY PUT SOMETHING FUNNY IN IT, or better yet, NEVER MAKE ONE AGAIN.



KolyKoly

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

This makes poop look good.

I seriously didnt like it. This movie had nothing funny about it and was extremly boring to watch.



toocrazyforlifetoocrazyforlife

Rated 0 / 5 stars

I agree with zaxterion

that sucked. really. put something in there that is funny. not your best work.