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Lies - a poem

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It's a poem, about lies.
Written in Dr. Suess style, with totally awesome actual British accent...hopefuls.
basically, we could all learn a lesson from this flash.
Especially you Helga! ...you lying ogre...

www.wonderfling.com

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mixed reviews

first of all, yeah you've got people all over the place with thier reviews. Some love it and want more, others want to blam it. Personally I like it. As for the art and so forth, I know that its only greg and matt doing this, and that matt is probably the only one doing the art because well, Greg isnt that good at drawing. I think the simple and (not to sound rude) but Remedial art actually give wonderfling a "style" in some weird way. It certainly shows you not to take things too seriously.

i liked it

good poem could work on the graphics though and who is helga. was the peom for them?

Boring

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You gave this entry a 0... August 30, 2005
Reviewed by: drummer_boy Overall rating: 4
..lowering its score from 2.3990 to 2.3889!

I can't like this. I'll quickly get over the awful animation and drawing, because everyone notices that right way. However, the poem was pretty terrible. It was barely good enough to pass off as a cheap children's story, pawning lessons in morality and character building in easy-to-swallow, mind numbing "poetic" noise. I'll assume you wrote the poem yourself; otherwise I'll lose even more respect for you. You have no rhythm, and you rhyme for the sake of rhyming. Your reading is bland and rushed, and you put on a really creepy, fake British accent for no reason other than you think you can do it.

Other than that, of course, stellar work! ...
Graphics: 2 Sound: 5 Interactivity: 0 Style: 0 Violence: 0 Humor: 3

You gave this entry a 0...

..lowering its score from 2.3990 to 2.3889!

I can't like this. I'll quickly get over the awful animation and drawing, because everyone notices that right way. However, the poem was pretty terrible. It was barely good enough to pass off as a cheap children's story, pawning lessons in morality and character building in easy-to-swallow, mind numbing "poetic" noise. I'll assume you wrote the poem yourself; otherwise I'll lose even more respect for you. You have no rhythm, and you rhyme for the sake of rhyming. Your reading is bland and rushed, and you put on a really creepy, fake British accent for no reason other than you think you can do it.

Other than that, of course, stellar work! ...

that was pretty good.

i most definetly liked that, did you write that poem yourself?

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Aug 29, 2005
6:29 PM EDT