Score: 6
"Interesting..."
date: August 26, 2005
You seem to have a certain style of animation in mind, and I felt that you were a little off from what could have been. I would see if you could refine your animation to avoid the more unusual (and normally impossible) limb positions, as well add somewhat more detailed backrounds to certain points, as you watch most of this short film on a plain white backround.
Other than that, it was a farily nice thing to watch a few times, which is a lot more than I can say about the vast majority of things I have seen before. I could imagine a series of similar cartoons in the future, if you wanted to do that.
February 17, 2008
Author's Response:
Well, I'll respond to this review backwards. This character is taken out of context. He is a character from a series of yearly comic strips I wrote. So you did look into this animation correctly in that I was aiming for something and that kinda thing. But this cartoon is very different than those comics. This cartoon was really my first attempt at a flash cartoon.
Even today i still havnt gotten better at keeping the whole proportion thing in mind heh.
