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Hey~Everyone! This is my VERY first game and my VERY first submission to newgrounds... I realize that my game doesn't stand up to the other dating sims out there, but this is still a BETA!!!!
I worked on the project with 2 other artists, both of which have galleries on deviant art.
The game is still in development as we try and figure out something new we can add to the Dating Sim Genre of game... this is where you come in.
PLZ! I need constructive critisism and suggestions on what to add! All of your comments (yes, even the childish ones) will be appreciated!
Coul have been nice with some background music and other nice etc.
hmm its good needs a little work but i think your getting there and i just saw the date it was submitted itd old -_-" lol but nice work [=
A little more work to it
Great game, i think this is just the start of a really awesome dating sim id love to play :) first off, i think you should add more women to date. also try creating a nice background to the main page, like make a town where you can go to the movies, park,mall and school etc. In the Love Hina sim date you can choose out of 3 guys to be your character, i think you should do the same for this :D make it so you can actually go out to places with the woman you choose to date. Remember to mark down under actions like visiting and training your strength how much HP it will take. Another small thing i noticed, when you get over $1000 it cuts off the end of the numbers a bit. Perhaps you can make the goal of the game to collect a few special mementos from each or at least one girl that you can get on dates. Add a few more places to visit. And maybe at the end some exciting cheat codes :D I really like the dojo and the idea to get more energy ;D Overall, love the game! Wonderful artwork in it as well, i hope to see this become something amazing :D *****
The art was cute, but it was boring. You only had the one girl, which might work if there was a reason she was there. And when, exactly, does he know her enough to date her? But, I think you could definately make this into something.
I REALLY, REALLY thought that the art was CUTE. It's awesome. I know it's still a Beta, but just wanted you to know, put in good music, an interesting plot in which the game would revolve around in, some good dialog, more awesome characters, and better jobs. I think that you just have to do some more tweaking and you're done. Really cool, I say. Keep at it! I LOVE YOUR ART. :3
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