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This movie will not make as much sense now as it will when i make the first episode i hope you all enjoy!!
It was going great until that whole green sword effect thing and the guy sounds like he's constipated. I like the artwork and animation thou.
This seems like a good premise but it needs some information to explain the green attack that the black night has. Also, the animation could use some improvement as well as the voices. Its a good thing you have subtitles otherwise you wouldnt be able to figure out was is going on.
Okay, its good work. But it needs some clearer dialog and finer quality.
The weapons and armor, though hardly out of place in a FANTASY world, are somewhat unimaginative; try a little variation from medieval plate and ninja swords (katana are curved; ninja swords are straight and angular, thus the lack of challenge). It'll kick up your graphics and style scores and present an interesting challenge to your drawing ability. Decent job with names. The use of the green ... whatever to destroy the castle was totally ridiculous, which is why you got a score for humor. If the mysterious knight had cut all the defenders down with great speed and skill, it would have been much cooler, though also much harder to draw. Plus, the green makes him invincible, which is the reason Fist of the North Star was so stupid. Put a little more emotion into your voice acting; nobody feels the same way about taking back what's theirs and actually acquiring it. Conflict vs. victory. Overall, it was good, but I hope the next episodes are improvements to the series.
Nice, but louder voices please.
Theme was nice but the sound could be better. I could hardly hear the people talking over the music and other sounds...
A short film about a park bench
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