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We continue our story with Trip setting off to rescue Nita. This segment has much more animation for you to enjoy! Don't forget to watch part 1 if you haven't yet!
that wuz kinda funny when that one guy fell off the desk i liked it
you need to make um longer. more people like um long.
They have to fit under a certain file size. Trust me I'm making them as long as I possibly can! (And if I did make them longer they would either be super tiny or completey unviewable quality, and I'm pretty sure people would complain about those things)
Don't worry the next segment is an entire minute longer! (And it will look a little uglier)
K so the goods and bads
Good, - half decent claymation, overrated yes, the MALE voiceactign was good in SOME parts, however, in others, the voiceacting was just not funny / appropriate.
Bad - Again, the jokes are lame, predicatble, and poorly excecuted, I didnt even smile once, it was an insult to humor. Especially sicne you can tell when it TRYS to be funny, but ultimatly fails.
I don;t think something can be classified as "over-rated" unless it's rated highly in the first place. 3.92 is not a super high score. Sorry you didn't like the humor.
I'm sure you worked very hard on this.
Not any better
Well I can see that you already made the entire thing and are putting them in segments (I gets it) so saying to make it funnier won't really do anything because you can't, since it's already made. Well the animation is still great and jokes still suck, if the 3rd part is the same i'll spare you saying the same thing over again, if it's funny however i'll review it.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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