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i think it's good for a second stick movie(that I ever made ever made)
Very good for a first flash and i like linkin park theree my favriot band so you get a 10!
good for a stick movie
it wasent near the best flash move ive seen but for a stick movie it was good!! the movement was smooth and the battle seens were slightlly slow and awkwerd. i hope it gets in just becouse the graphics are gr8 for a stick movie i aint seen one as good!!!
Need more plot.
Lets sum this up. The music. Okay well its good but then again not good. The thing about this particular song is that it lingers between tension and calm. Its a good intro song but for a battle scene its just dont fit. Okay the battles. The blade battle was...well out of place. If there headed into a fight knowing the opponent has guns, I see really no use to bring a sword or even an axe which would be alot heavier. The battleitself was dissapointing, needs more movement. The gun and shotgun battle. Was well awkward an unlogical. You run into a fight head on especially face to face with a gun. The plain explosion would have been quicker and the entire plane would problably be blown. You know istead of just peaces. They need cover, distance. Lastly the fist fight. Okay well if they had these amazing high speed power and skill, I doubt they need any type of ammunitions. The whole death by axe thing was also dissapointing I'm pretty he could have dodged that. The whole action scene was sort of dull and slow. You need more instensity, more tension. personify the characters a bit. Make them feel, express emitions.
Second of all if youre trying to empress anybody or gain any rep. Dont do it with stick figs. Newgrounds has evolved from stick fig flashes, for good reason. Ive took notice of youre past sprite movies. They seem alright, thou a bit repeatative. You could make a nice series. But enough of the killingspree theme it becomes a bore.
Ok, the first thing is music. Good start, but went a bit loud and junky, and no fittible, maybe that is one area to improve, and experiment with new things.
Stickmen are getting boring, try to get proper people looks, like a head with eyes etc. Experiment.
The guns i do not like. stick men could still hold them. Experiment.
All in all try new things and most of all...
I hope this helps.
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