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Hey all, this is my first flash on newgrounds, i'm new to flash and the portal but, enjoy and please review with helpful comments on how i can improve.
That was good considering ur new, i usually would hate this kind of pointless random voilence, but actuallly t'wasn't so bad. :)
keep it up
very random and pointless violence, but it was pretty cool to watch.
they need a storyline and you need more fluid movements. that was kewl.
Not bad for a first flash. The guns were pretty well drawn and there was a good amount of blood. But you need to make a storyline add a background and make it a little longer.
I am plannin to do a new one starrin both of us agen, but more story related and with backgrounds and not so much violence ^^
GIVE ME CAPS LOCK OR GIVE ME DEATH
dude THE BEST FLASH I HAVE SEEN TODAY, MADE ME LAUGH, BLAM THAT FRONTPAGE CRAP, I GIVE THIS A 5, ANYONE WHO SLATES THIS HAS NEVER TRIED TO USE FLASH, IM STILL A CRAP BEGINNER, BUT THIS DUDE, THIS DESERVES FRONTPAGE
wow thank you very much 4 ur review ^^
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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