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This is the first episode of mine and HourGlass's Ingus series. This one is just a short conversation between Ingus and a Green Bay Packers bear weilding a sword. Enjoy!
Created by me, animated by me, written by me and Seth Forsman, voices by Seth Forsman, music by Cake.
lol wtf was that guy on
man that guy was insane and why the hell did the bear have a cheese on its head? i remember years ago when i used to watch wwf wrestling steve blackman wore 1 once when he was tagged with al snow
...that made me laugh.
I've actually had many a conversation similar to that with a number of people.
Nice start but it needed more "Flash"
You've come a long way in drawing characters and it shows. The Packers bear was VERY well animated, especially his lip movement.
Your choice of music as well as the voice recording was done well. I'm sure you know how bad it can be if all you hear is muffled sounds in a Flash.
For all you did, you could've done more with the background, the story, and the jokes.
Also, I'm still seeing some choppiness with the frame movement as well as a little problems with the hand grip on Ingus.
All-around, a good start to a premise that only a few have tried before well. Special kudos on keeping the file size way down!
I was fed up with trying to make things marbel smooth. I never finish things when I try really hard on every aspect, so I didn't really give a shit when it came to the hand. Leave it to the Flash Bros. to make everything perfect. I'll just stick to making lazy, sub-pars and actually finish them than real nice looking flash that I can't do more than ten seconds of. Thanks for the review.
ooo... on the edge of technology
Shooting swords? that's so next gen.
I liked it, all my five etc, could make more. But main issue was that you could hear the beginning of the audio clips.. it wasn't smooth. it clips right at the beginning. So uh.. fix that and you're good to go.
And i thought it might be interesting if you made the outline lines bolder/bigger
The hunter becomes the hunted
A chicken goes to work.
Cool and Great
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