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This is my first flash, submitted to Ng.
Cold as Ice (The beginning)
My thoughts now: Damn, this is bad, but I like to leave it here to look upon how much I've improved. Besides, I'm lazy to remake the first episode.
Well, good -Rule-...
It's obvious this was your first flash, as it was a little rough around the edges. But watching you over time has made your graphics and drawings improve and your music get better.
By no means is this a bad flash. It is actually very good. I was just saying that it's obvious you were newer to flash when this was made. :P
I'm thinking of re-doing this, so it could look up-to-date.
Not bad at all
I liked the creative edge you had a the very beginning by adding "-Rules- imagination presents" - haha classy.
Anyway these two things I thought about while watching your flash:
Shading: I know the drawings weren't very good and this is your first flash but I think just adding a little shading just to the hair can make all the difference.
Remove the continue button: I don;t like these in general, it interupts the flow of the flash and personally I like to just lean back on my chair and just watch it. These "continue" buttons only annoy me.
Anyway I apologize that I'm only listing the negative things but this is a fairly old flash compared to your newer ones so I find it a little pointless to repeat the good things that previous reviewers have said, yanno?
But i'm hoping you will get better
It was worth my time!
Not the greatest art work, but it is flash. Nice tunes to go with and I like the concept, I'll have to watch the rest now, which is a good thing.
I mean, it was my first, so I don't reccomend voting high on the graphics.
Thanks for watching my movies.
Spanish: Muy buena animacion!! XD
English: Very Good animation!! XD
Yay, one of my favorite authors replied to a flash artist like me?? Thank you. I'd like to be you someday..
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