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Aug 15, 2005 | 6:28 AM EDT

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i made it in my 5 minutes



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Quality work you got there temdog

What more can I say?


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Shut up alkador, who are you to say?

anyway I thought it was ok. not something i'd add to my favourites or go telling friends to watch, but not something I would consider crap. Alkador you may think your a constuctive critisiser but really you're just some idiot who picks out all the flawed points and marks it on that.


Rated 1 / 5 stars

Could be much better

As you know I am a harsh reviewer, so I will give you some critical comments for this flash. The first thing that would be recommended to use in most flashes is a backgroun which is capable of engaging the viewer and keeping their interest alerted throughout the length of the entire flash. By doing this, you not only add more depth, but create a higher level of effectiveness which is used in the more 'advanced' flashes out there.

The next suggestion I hold is a quote; 'If you are going to make something simple, at least present it at a high quality'. This goes towards the banana and apple, where an extreme level of depth can be added towards them. High level shading and curves can be used to really bring life into the flash, which could raise your type of style. Sometimes doing this type of depth is enough to not require a background.

The next suggestion I hold for you is to use some sounds, anything. The music you have is simple and effective, but maybe you should add something else to make the flash more effective as a whole.

Finally, spend more time on your work. You could have made a greater effort for this flash. You could have added more comic relief by having one 'give birth' or something out of whack that the viewer would not expect. The key to a flash is having the viewer drawn in and kept them at edge at a state where they want more. Keep this in mind and I hope that your future flash are at a much higher calibre than what I have seen.

Good luck with future work.


Rated 0 / 5 stars

What the hell

That was the stupidest thing i've seen. Put some thought into your work next time. What the hell was this?

Sharagoneal responds:

It was beautiful, thats what it was


Rated 5 / 5 stars



Sharagoneal responds:

How awesome is it ^_^