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please watch all of them before you vote, i know the first one sucks, but it was my first flash ever and i wanted to have it in there. so please watch the other ones too
a little advice if u want it
the reason i gave u 10 is to be the 1'st to have a good review about u i see in the banna part of the movie it was the best because u actually shown u learnt a few things about flash (back grounds) tween etc. so so far ur on the right track of learning flash the only 3 things i say u could improve on is animating a walk cycle on the character there is a few good flashs on here that teachs that type walk cycles in the search newgrounds box and u should get a few add more character in ur character u can show this by the way his facial expressions are wether his walk is a vibrant happy walk or a life less walk make story boards on paper before u create flash so u know what ur goal in ur flash is going to be and u will find it extremley easier if u do this i think ur character is as u said ''simplistic'' but u can change it a little to make it simplistic yet looks great so i would say do what u want with characters just do what i said above make them have purpose the chainsaw part of the movie felt like i was watching a motion tween and a few frames of blood this is good for learning ur self but not really good for posting on newgrounds since most of the people here are very closed in helping new people as ur self so keep making flash and learn at least 2 things from each flash u make and u should be alright good luck in the future ;)
i am not trying to offend u just give u a little help as well as a good review
thanks dude, i always appreciate the comments of people who are drunk, especially when i'm drunk myself, which most certainly is the case right now.
Thx for the nice and helpfull review, it made me feel kinda good about myself :)
I'm going to review each one seperately. Few things first though. The graphics were okay but not to special. Style... the little clip-its here and there style is a bit overused yet decent nonehteless. Sound was only good becasue of the music. There was way to much blood and violence. For no absolute reason... violence belongs in horror and action movies not random stuff. I like the menu. Nice touch. Humour was pretty good but then got really dumb.
The Performer: 3
Bad. He did a repeative animation and the background changes. OH! I forgot the song in the background. That's why you get a 3.
Why did he cut himself with a chainsaw? Nonetheless, still bad.
Blood = Feul: 2
A car drives by and cuts of his legs then he flys up into space. Could have been more creative.
This was kind of funny. A tree falls into a fireplace and burns everything.
The banana quest: 5
No doubt the best one but I got a question. Why did he take a shit? That's why you got the same as before.
Overall: Try harder.
thx for the giant revieuw dude !
and thx for not giving me 0 !
And he took a shit cause I like shit, especially the concept of taking a shit. Have you ever thought about the concept ? Did you ever give 'taking a shit' serious thought ? You should do that some time.
But if you want a normal explanation I got one for you: the fact he takes a shit is just his way to express he's not impressed by the signs that warn him for the deadly banana.
it flat out sucks
i understand this being your first flash, but did u have to post it here? you could have posted it anywhere else like your pc hard drive. when you understand what animation is and not what you posted is try again.... next time wipe your ass before u load this stuff here
thanks, i'll keep my toilet paper close next time. This ain't my first flash thaugh.. i have another one ("other submitions by Jules Colle" (just scroll down and you'll see it))
And i realyse this submition isn't a very arty one, but headman is like my only creation i like (even though i didn't create it all by myself.. but that's a different story). I know I can do better, but why should I make stuff I don't like ? Well never mind, you can't answer that question cause there's no respond-button. Thx for the 9 for violence :)
Just a little tip for you, if you really want to get your movie through the judgement progress, calling all Newgroundites "a bunch of fucking morons" might not be the best idea in the world.
i wasn't talking to all newground-people, just to the morons like you, and the other guy, who just blam a movie after watching 2 seconds of it cause they see a pourely animated symplistic figure that anyone can draw doing some stupid ass motion tweened shit..
ok guess i'm breaking down my own movie now :) But whatever, headman rules !
and don't ever use a Queen ssong and fuck it up with bad flash
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