Score: 8

"nice?"

by: Kolter

date: November 3, 2009

I like it.. .alright

Score: 8

"never"

by: darklittledevil5

date: September 20, 2009

quite seen something like this. really simple, but very different from what I am use to on this website. I like it. But the the storyline lacks where the art doesn't. it never really pulled through to tie it all together.

Score: 9

"Unique"

by: godhammer

date: September 14, 2009

And interesting visual. Simple, yet effective, and it goes far beyond the cartoon style that so many have come to assume comes hand in hand with Newgrounds animation. Curious use of School from Supertramp as the closing piece...

I would suggest this though. Have, aside from the single images, others that would make a sort of impact, for a lasting impact. For example, an image that suggests the nature of the death.

Score: 10

"cool flash."

by: catsniper115

date: September 9, 2009

it really grabs the concept. that ping got me at the end, lol.

Score: 10

"Expected something else."

by: mtri

date: August 29, 2009

Good thing it didn't happen. At the end I was waiting for something to pop out and the little *ding* got me. Wonderful flash.