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I should be releasing the next episode by next week. Heres is the preview http://newgrounds.com/ng
THAT FUCKING RULES!!!!!!!
ITS GREAT! THE STORY IS PERFECT, U HAVE LOTS OF EXPERIENCE, but the music, can u tell those what they are?
The graphic work is beautiful. Truely beautiful. But the music stops abruptly and there's little to no plot to it. If you were to put a solid plot to it, it would be perfect. Otherwise good job.
The story has been done before, and as the last guy said, the black studded trench coat is a little cliche, but the art is very nice. This definatly has potential. :)
I don't know what to say...
Animation and Graphics are great except for that one part where it went black and white. The story is quite different from most vampire stories, despite the fact that the upcoming fight you left off on is cliche'. (I won't say what cause it will ruin it for some.) Anyways, great and interesting story. As for the fight scene, that was where people can really see great animation style. The blood effect was not cheesy, how the people died was nice, and there was NO overused DBZ styled stuff that lazy animators use. You definately put alot of thought and effort in there. As for the sound. FX umm... I don't know. Music is good, but how you switched to Wait and Bleed didn't transition well. And the action, although awesome, did not sinc well with the music. Still, a very nice series will come out of this fine piece of work.
You Lost a lot of points on sound.
I hope there are inprovements in sound.
It wasn't the soundtracks. I'm indifferent to the stone sour or Slipknot and I love System of a Down's Revenga, but you lose a lot of experiance when there aren't sound effects. IF you're not planning on using sound effects... that's fine... but work on your transitions between songs and work on how you cut them off.
Also, the concept sucks... but artists never can write, so I forgive you :)
As for everything else... I think you've made a successful (thought apparently painful) transition from stick artist to human figure artist. Your violence technique is superior to most violence artists and you seem to have a slight edge when it comes to epic godlike blasts of power... as demonstrated by your maelstrom of blood.
Keep it up... but work on the sound or get another dude to do it and you'll have quite a great piece on your hands.
ASTEROID HURLING TOWARDS EARTH!!!
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