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Aug 8, 2005 | 5:50 AM EDT

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This is an animated short about what happens to a new submission when it sucks and get's blammed.

(WARNING: there is a blam worthy part in the middle... but it's part of the point I am making so grit through that 7 seconds of pain as it leads to the conclusion of the story with the same animation style as there is in the beginning)

It was inspired by the blammed art of Edmund McMillen.

This is my first attempt at this mini-series so tell me what you like, what you don't and what I should do to improve.

Reviews


ArtistJArtistJ

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 8, 2005

wonderful

this is a wonderful interpretation on the newgrounds portal. I hope this makes front page. Your effort was well paid off.


PureCarnage responds:

Thanks ArtistJ. If it makes front page, I'll definately have to put more effort in part 2.


c0wzc0wz

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 8, 2005

Hmm

The end needs to be have more gore. Also it needs to be graphical. The text just doesnt work. Also! I was about to blam the flash when i saw the sex shit pop up. Make it clear you are watching THAT flash and not THIS flash.

Sincerly, Your lord and Master, Cowz. (foamy shall pay!)


PureCarnage responds:

I now included a warning in my title... but good point, I need to clearly define the fact this is a insert of what is blam worthy within a flash about why it gets blammed... to confuse less.

Lots of great suggestions I will concider them all in part 2. Thanks :D


JasonismJasonism

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 8, 2005

Nice point..

I have to admit, the animation for the walking SWF was actually pretty smooth and fluent. The word it's trying to point out is easily understood. Good overall submission.


PureCarnage responds:

Thanks, it's kind of a combination of several image manipulating techniques I have been sorting out so I can do more toon style animation. This is really my practice run.


Broken-Time-StudioBroken-Time-Studio

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars August 8, 2005

?

It looked good in the start but then you made it suck.


PureCarnage responds:

How so?


richbum888richbum888

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 8, 2005

nice job

keep up the good work


PureCarnage responds:

Thanks, I want to do these as little mini shorts. Because there is so much blammy crap, I have to laugh at some of what I've seen and make fun of it.