it is okey

Sound not really good..

okay

nothing too exciting and a very random animation, but it was alright to watch and you efforts were alright.

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Stop scarying me like that :P i get nightmeres like those

((( DECENT )))

It was pretty decent, i like the way you have animated everything, you have a really nice style here. The voices sounded good, but the sound effects were off, maybe next time you could work on that, it was still good though. The story was ok, and this was interesting to watch...

~X~

Practice makes perfect.

Keep working at it, your style is good and you have a great imagination, but let's face it, you're not a flash artist yet. You would benefit a lot from making your characters movements a bit less obviously tweened, and adding a bit more flexibility. You can use "easing" to slow down or speed up the beginings and endings of tweens. This can help a lot to make movements look organic, something that really sets the best flash artists apart from the rest. the"EASE" slider can be found on the properties window when a tweened keyframe is selected.

Best of luck!