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Jul 28, 2005 | 8:10 PM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place July 29, 2005

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__INTRO_____
hey how's it going?
cigarette? no?
you're right this could kill you...
But I prefer this than a gun to the head It's slow acting, but it get the job done. What I'm about to show you is a story about a man's pain that can only be hammered down with guns and bullets.
You should sit down for this.
This might hurt a bit.

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update
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4th place! thanks for the support!

Reviews


rashaverak7rashaverak7

Rated 2 / 5 stars

well its good

but you can't just go from lamb of god to smashing pumpkins man!


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Genius-KidsGenius-Kids

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

good

great


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preacher79preacher79

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Smells like a NOIR spirit.....

You definetly got right atmosphere, but where is a story behind? Better make a second part and move forward with a story!!!


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emokid14emokid14

Rated 5 / 5 stars

sweet

awesome. hope to see the next soon



austinhurstaustinhurst

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

nice

cant wait to see the next one

storys looking good

im a fan for the gore as well : )