Score: 8

":P"

by: blueblowbang

date: March 15, 2006

hmm it seems kinda choppy o.o maybe u can remove sum seconds on the second per frame thingy :P
other than that its GOOD ^-^
love love love

Score: 5

"Too emotional!"

by: legacy0100

date: March 15, 2006

It just looked like a collection of 'pretty backgrounds' or 'beautiful scenes'. There was no flow in the movie and it lacked a core theme. I took a look at your other submission,' Pretty baby'. At least that one had a theme. You say this isn't your full potential and its only a trailer. Well then study this criticism and make sure you don't make the same mistake on the full version.

I'm sorry if this come out as chauvinistic, but this is the reason why I don't like female flash makers. They prioritize what looks pretty rather than what makes sense. Something is beautiful to look at, then their emotions get in the way and prevent them from doing a good directing job. Not saying all of you are, but it's one of the main feminine characteristics. So a masculine girl (masculine as in personality, not necessarily physically) would do just as good a job directing just like any other men out there I suppose.

Your movies are way too feminine. If you want to be a popular flash artist? then you need to neutralize this and allow both genders to enjoy your movie. Take 'There she is!' for example. A healthy dose of romance and action (the chase scenes).

Score: 9

"A savior... thank the heavens...!"

by: Nomader

date: July 28, 2005

Finally - after sifting through tons of flash, and feeling that most of it was made by no potential authors who say "go easy on it, its my first flash" - I come upon this flash - you can tell that the animations a bit shaky - couldve been better - but no matter, this is one of the better flashes I've seen in the portal. The drawing talent was spectacular - while most of the first time authors you see around here make cruddy stick figures who shoot fake guns... this is talent here- I look forward to the series!

Score: 9

"dude not bad"

by: GamingTowelie

date: July 28, 2005

i was pretty impressed of this if its your first man ur good but like the last guy said you should have place it bigger like 24 and yeah i give it 3.5 on 5 but ill put it to 4 cuse i rock

Score: 8

"wow! keep up the good work"

by: Temariix

date: July 28, 2005

great work on the graphics! the sound could have been a bit better as well. and one sugestion, i think you had the frame rate set at 12, it made the fading in and out a bit choppy. next time try 24 or somewhere around there. other than that great job and i cant wait to see the final piece!