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by: Evil-Dog
Submitted: 07/28/2005 | 07:01AM EST
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Current Score: 2.90 / 5.00
286 votes | 1,527 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Ok, I have taken your advice and crafted a new ending. Tell me what you think.
This is a Grimms fairy-tale. This tale contains a hidden layer of meaning which is not readily apparent. The encoded meanings and the mechanism used to conceal them within the narrative will be revealed in a later piece.
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Average Score: 5.6 / 10
"hmmmm"
it was good and all but i wanted a better ending....i was like omg this is great then it just ended....its like a sudden cliff you werent expecting....make the ending much better and it would be perfect i mean perfect!
"this was missing something..."
i think there should've been a little more of a conflict....not like a physical fight. also i think it was missing some twist ending....u know like he's too lazy to take the crown...or too lazy to do something....just a twist
other than that i did like it, keep it up!
Good point. It is a Grimms tale so there is a limit to what is possible, but yes, I do see an opportunity right at the end.
Thanks
"It was alright..."
The punchline wasn't that good. It was kinda slow. But a really good effort. Definatley doesn't deserve blamming. It's a decent job.
Yes, I realize that it is a bit slow. The point was less in making it entertaining than in making it clear.
In the next piece I intend to return to the story with a couple of observers. One who voices the same criticisms as pointed out here, while the other explains the hidden meanings contained within the story.
"Encoded messages or not.."
.. I actually expected a punchline after all of that. Maybe in your next version, the newly-crowned laziest son should push the old fart out of bed and get down to some serious sluggardness! :)
Excellent idea!
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It was ok I suppose. It ended too quickly, and the charcaters spoke soooo sloooowly.
