Score: 7
"Truth"
date: August 14, 2009
Okay, your work has gotten a lot better. Just keep working at it. Watch Exiles to get some ideas. The usage of the stage was bad because the camera never moved. Movement of the camera makes it look like they are not just sprites pasted on a picture. It draws people in more. The fight didn't seem epic enough. There was no time in the fight scenes that was "Eye popping". You need more, "Holy Shit! That was awesome!" moments. People like to see a display of speed and power in characters, and clever attacks. Something to make people go, "Oooooooooh snap!!!!" Yes, everyone knows the basic movements of those characters, but make up some new moves that nobody has seen before. Use music that everyone is familiar with. Use rock music to bring out the Epicness of the battle. If you can, use voice overs. Just need a lot more BANG!
But the good points are. It is a great improvement of your last film, and I dare you not to quit. Though you seem to be limited with the sprites you still have clever use of the sprites. Like the "kip-up" they do. It is entertaining to watch though. You did a very good job. Just keep at it, and in no time you will be this crazy sprite animator. I wish you luck.