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Phoenix Feather chapter 2 continues from the first chapter, Phoenix takes on Deathwing.
I Loved it And I loved It Becaus I Am A Phoenix freak :P
i like the story line, and the graphics aren't too bad, although they could use some work to smooth thing out. im looking forward to the next chapter.
The drawing/tweening look a little crude at times, but a lot of the FBF animation is good. I think maybe you should fix up your pacing, pick a bit more dramatic (non-rock) songs, and look into getting some voice actors (but only use em if you can find GOOD ones).
An example of bad pacing was when the dude was flying around and cutting what looked like nothing with his sword. It went on too long...
I like the rest though.. cool story. I'd say to also have the narration text (in the first part) go on the bottom of the screen rather on the top because it's hard to read.
Keep working on this, though. It's pretty cool looking and you've got potential as long as you keep improving.
Didnt like that at all. The art was ok, but the way it was put together was pretty shabby. A major over-use of cheesy music forced me to turn off. It made no sense at all, and each scene was drawn out and tiring to watch.
You go and do better then!
0 dude i didnt think flash could be this crap..............
But you have proved me wrong
Well looks like you can be wrong many times.
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Mysterious bunny follows kid home
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