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Jul 22, 2005 | 10:58 AM EDT
  • Daily Feature July 23, 2005

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Thankyou everyone for the Daily Feature!! AND FRONTPAGE

Just to clear one thing up, as stated, this is the first part of an animation battle between me (Talon) and Salocin, another animator. Salocin will be animating part 2, and then I will be animating part 3 etc. until the story has ended.

This was fully animated and designed by me and is the highest quality flash made by me yet. I'd like to thank Lucien Dodge for his outstanding voice acting performance, Nanoko Studios for his excellent music contribution, and the band my brother is (OMIT) in for letting me use one of their songs.

Original Animation Battle idea by JAE.

PS. Yes I realise Atsuya's hair style makes him resemble Spike, also it’s only the first part, and you can be sure that story will develop more as each part is completed. I put allot of work into this so please don’t vote low just because of that.

Reviews


Spacemonkey32587Spacemonkey32587

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 25, 2005

Was that Spike?

A agree with deathspectra, Ryu definetly gives off a Spike vibe. I don't think there was much of a plot line, but the animation was great. I think it just needed to be longer. I really wanna see part 2 :)



deathspectradeathspectra

Rated 4 / 5 stars July 25, 2005

Interesting.

Given the lack of details, i can not say THAT much about this. The artwork was very impressive. The story was lacking in the first, and I was rather disappointed that I didn't get to see someone get the crap knocked out of them. In any case, I definitely wanna catch the next part. That Ryu guy reminds me of Spike from Cowboy Bebop... I dunno.. I just get that vibe from em.



CaspatioCaspatio

Rated 0 / 5 stars July 25, 2005

wow... nothing happened...

that... was possibly the WORST beginin toa series ever. the art was great, but u did nothing for ur story by A. having no fight scenes, B. not giving any background WHAT SO EVER. (in a series this is esential), and C. nothing made sense because of the huge lack of B= no back ground. by this i mean, who was the dude in the red koma(or however it's spelt), and why did he have to die and what did he mean by legacy and, and, and, AND! too many ands.. get the point? great, u can make suspense, but nobody wants to watch part 2 if it's anything like part one. better luck next time pal. BUT UR art is amazing, just hire a writer, thats all.



toeheadtoehead

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 25, 2005

wow!

i love your style and everything! I think that you should make it longer that was too short ! i was really getting in to it ! god i can't wait till the next animation!



dizzystardizzystar

Rated 4 / 5 stars July 24, 2005

It was pretty good.

It was a pretty good cartoon as far as serious animations go. The rain was extremely well-made, and so were a good handful of your character shots. My only peeve with it, and this is only my opinion, is that it's slightly cliched.

Also, in my opinion, you'd get a lot bette scores if you hadn't ended it so soon. By ending it only where the action starts and not giving the watcher more of a taste first, they don't look forward to the next one as much as they could, or should.

This cartoon was pretty nice, and I like your drawing style. Can't wait for more.


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