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It's a chicken giving advise, I honestly don't know how to describe it. Give some better advise, or throw in some philosophy, it'll turn out a bit better.
Author Comments
Made as a birthday present, it is a very short break from development of my very long movie, "Star Chores".
luminousnerd responds:
Thanks for the pointers :)
the voice
is kind of hard to understand a bit, I mean, I can understand it but yeah it's a bit garbly other than that it was pretty good ^^
pretty slick for the guy you made it for I'm sure : )
luminousnerd responds:
Yea, just a quick thing :) I can't believe it wasn't blammed, heh! Thanks for the comments!
a mask over a voice is like a paper bag over the..
elephant man, if you put it on, people dont respect your true nature. just made that crap up i did right there lol! never seen one of these before! good flash :)
luminousnerd responds:
Thanks =D
Funny
this was actualy on of my faveorite flash ever :P btw how many frazez did he have?
luminousnerd responds:
LOL I'm glad you liked it - 50 of them! Who knows, I might add more!
improvement needed!
i know that i would really enjoy something like this for my birthday, but from a 'viewers' point of view, it needs improvement.
since there's only one 'scene', or background, you should have spent a bit more time making the graphics look as snazzy as possible.
also, even with all that audio content you could have made the quality a lot better, as the filesize at the current moment isn't that big.
overall, its a good little idea, and i've been entertained by these little sayings. not bad.
luminousnerd responds:
Thanks for the comments! Yes, it's not the best for a viewer, I didn't even expect it to live on NG...I did this the day of his birthday, so I didn't have a whole lot of time ^_^ Thanks for the comments, I definitely could bump it up a notch, and I might later on.