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i noticed in your reviews some of you thought i copied tn with my characters therefore i went back to my old characters and decided to continue on from episode 2 were me ben james and soner have a huge gang war enjoy vote 5!
it was ok
it needs to make sense and feel in the story line
Please read my review!!!
Using the car was a bad idea, it clashes with the drawn stuff. Your people have no legs, real people do have legs. Your guys all looked like clones of one another. When the one said he had a surprise for the others I thought for sure that he was going to pull out his penis, because clearly you and all of your mates (by the way, a mate is someone you mate with, you'll learn what mating is when you hit your clearly delayed puberty) are homosexual lovers of the cock.
By the way, please allow me to take a moment to laugh at what happened to your mother. If only she had been blown to little mommy-bits, then it would have been truely funny. I pray that someday you may still get the chance to see your mother explode into several smaller fragments of herself right before your very eyes. Perhaps even in your arms. She could come home from the store (or whatever you Brits call them) and come to give you a nice big loving hug. "Hi faggot," she'd say with a gleam in her eye as she spots you masturbating over the body of your sleeping father.
"Hi Mum," you'd reply, quickly losing your erection due to a female coming too close, but regaining it at the thought of incest with your mother. As you embrace her in this most awkward, but somehow normal to your family, moment she would detonate. No bomb, no crash, no grenades or built up menstrual gas. Just spontaneous human detonation. I hope that you one day experience this very scenario. Please email me when you do, I would like to leave a steaming shit on your mother's grave. Please never submit to newgrounds again.
yeah well ive got somthing to say to you
i hope your mum gets put i prison and raped to death i hope that she dies a most apinful death coz if you come down to england i will fucking knock you out you lanky cunt your mum is a big fat slut who i did last night and tell her i forgot to give here her money last night what 50 pence oh yeah she is that cheap and shes fucking fat your mum has a huge cock sticking out of her head and i hope your mum dies ahahahahhaha im glad most of your family are already dead i spit and piss on their graves because they were a bunch of bitches whores and assholes you fucking lanky wanker go suck your mum you pussyole!
I would like to thank you for compromising your art style. Not many other artist would do this. It is good to see that there are some artist in the portal who can handle critism.
Ehm.. well even though the voices were quite ehh.. poor shall we say (childlike and crackly mics) i suppose its likely that there isnt many other ways you could have done it. so Kudos for the bravery to put your own voices on there.
Plot um.. didnt make too much sense and overall wasnt very good.
animation itself wasnt TOO bad. but could also do with a polish.
keep trying :)
if this didt suck sobad,it might b good
well it might b better, if it made e sense, ad the voice overs didt suck so bad, and y r all the gang members the same? who r they, i dont no, u may have explained it but those high pitched crapy voice overs were too hard to uderstand. to b fair,the aimation was pretty good. i give it a D+
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