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Jul 19, 2005 | 11:40 PM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place July 21, 2005

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"A scientist spends all of his time fixing creatures, but has no time for the one he already made."

Hi Newgrounds, I'm Lokken's new cartoon, I spent my last year getting looked at by strange people all across America. Now he wants to torture me some more. You may need to change me to medium quality.

Thanks for frontpage Newgrounds!

Reviews


jason7717jason7717

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad... in fact, I liked it!

It was a little hard to understand but unless their is some greater plot point that Im not aware of it was simply about a monster who thought he was created for no reason, and thought that his creator hated him but he realised that his creator truly did care about him.

I thought it was humorous but not necessarily because of the storyline. I like how the monster threw rocks at the man. And he sprayed the kid on the bike, and then later when the flower hit the man he was holding *those giant scissor things you use for trimming hedges, cant recall their name* and although you knew what came next it didnt show him stabbing the kid to death. lol Hope that makes sense.

Anyways, I gave it a 7. It was pretty cool, not one of my faves. Ive seen better and worse. I liked the artstyle, and you had some cool humor ideas. Id like to see some more of that humor in future flashes from you.



Force1Force1

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Hmmm, kind of boring

It wasn't bad at all but it was a little boring. I understand fully it wasn't ment to be funny or at least not LOL funny and I also udnerstand it wasn't ment to be action but it was a little slow. Maybe it's just me. But I'll try not to be bias. Good job anyway.



Masterbasser36Masterbasser36

Rated 3 / 5 stars

meh

well made, but i needed more humor....ok humor i guess.....but needs more! good job though



XaionXaion

Rated 3 / 5 stars

I don;t really get it...

It was good as far as animation and sound is concerned...
How ever I would sudjest getting a little bit of help with you story lines. You got 6 on humor for the 'ouch' guy he made me chuckle.



gadestrogadestro

Rated 3 / 5 stars

nice graphics and drawning but i dont get it

it was an nice story but i don't get the humor