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Jul 19, 2005 | 11:40 PM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place July 21, 2005

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"A scientist spends all of his time fixing creatures, but has no time for the one he already made."

Hi Newgrounds, I'm Lokken's new cartoon, I spent my last year getting looked at by strange people all across America. Now he wants to torture me some more. You may need to change me to medium quality.

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Rated 4 / 5 stars


My god that was fucking great, touching, funny, screwed up, it had everything.. You were trying to make a point.. i cant really explain it!

The flash was great. Keep it up!


Rated 0 / 5 stars

Such a piece of crap. This is so fucking crapy .

Dude Why the fuck did you make this? Why did you waste your time when you could have beem uot with a girl or a guy(if your a girl). Dude this is the crapiest thing ever.


Rated 4 / 5 stars


man, i really liked it. i think you should have had that guy follow after the kid on the bike with his clippers and cut the kids head off. but im guessing it wasn't humor you were going for here. but still.. nice work.


Rated 1 / 5 stars


I felt like I was watching a cartoon for 10 year olds. Oh wait, I was.
I didn't find it funny, the characters looked like they were having seizures the entire time, and it had one of those cliché, done-to-death storylines.


replace monster with child, scientist with a parent of your choice and you've got your average day-time tv plot right there. Except day-time TV is more humourus than this.

Also, I can't believe so many people were involved in the production of this cartoon but none of them pointed out that it was crap along the way.

JeremyLokken responds:

Also, you probably couldn't believe why 4 national film festivals decided to screen it and why I won a national award from it.

Your profile links to your flash website, I pity the characters that you create. Without an open mind and an ability to expand, you'll never have characters that will change. You don't understand any of that, do you?

On a more detailed note, you've contradicted yourself. You compare it to a cartoon for 10 year olds, then you compare it to day-time TV, which is made for adults. You are saying the plot is for kids, but you are also saying the plot is for adults. This leads me to believe that you can't express your thoughts correctly.

I rate your review 1/10, the 1 for effort.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Haha. Ow.

One of those things that put a big smile on my face. Especially when he throws rocks at things. I love this so much.