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the full movie is coming soon......
What is this shit?
Ok, first of all, fix the grammar. You come off sounding like an idiot. "Already detenated 1 bomb"? "bad injured"? "13 people died" Don't you meant "detonated" and "badly injured" and "13 people dead"? I'm sure you do.
Secondly, the animation and artwork sucked. The only thing that really moved in the flash was the text. The depiction of the terrorist was lame and uninspired. Some guy with a beard behind a desk, huh? Ever thought to add a turban and some type of automatic rifle? Maybe a bomb-vest or at least a little fucking pin that says "terrorist" or "Hello my name is AHKMED". The blue building you showed, was that supposed to be where the terrorist was, or where the "Shining Dragon" guy was? Either way it was a really pathetic building.
Since your flash has so little story or action or movement of any kind, quality of art is the next biggest thing, and in that you are sorely lacking. I mean, come on, even a lame picture of some guy with a blood-tear, some sad music, a disembodied explosion animation, and some horribly written, misspelled text-over can score into the mid 4 range. You have no excuse, except that you are an even worse flash artist.
You definitely need to improve vastly before your next submission.
Wow, I thought that was going to be a totally cool looking movie, I can't wait for the Actual full-length.
i always did like things like that, it was very well done, but the text should have been just a bit slower, other then that, damn!
keep it up
ohh i culd see the fire in his eyes!!!
make the text easier to read and not soo fast apart from that it was ok
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