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Phoenix Feather Chapter 1

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The first chapter in the Phoenix Feather series. And for those who wanted to know the main character is 'Shark'(black hair,grey vest,etc), The guy with blue hair is 'Mako'(long grey trenchcoat), And the guy on the mountain at the end is 'Phoenix'.

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Well...

Well... I saw the fourth chapter and expected the other chapters to be at least that good, so I watched them waiting for the good part to come, but it never did. The music was okay but the characters all looked like you copied them out of Dragonball Z and I hate that show. The story didn't really have a plot either and who were these people?

Blueshark0407 responds:

yeah these chapters were made long before chapter 4............so what do you really expect!
Thanks for your review anyway!

???

What was the plot? And why did all the characters look strait out of DBZ? I hope the next chapters are better...

Blueshark0407 responds:

???

THIS FUCKING SUCKED

JIFFY LUBE~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 9000

Huh?

I don't understand! What story? Shark and Pheonix look the same! T__T I'm not understanding....

Blueshark0407 responds:

It will become clear soon but Shark and Phoenix are related.

ok

The graphics are ok, and the story seems to be getting interesting. Overall, nice work.

Blueshark0407 responds:

It gets better in chapter 2.

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