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Whew, finally finished. Worked on this one for about a month. This is the first episode for Stock Boy.
pretty good for your first episode
the overall humour is good. animation is alright. fix up the drawing a bit. AND DON'T WORRY. I KNOW THAT IT'S NOT SUPPOSED TO MAKE SENSE . (damn all those other halfwits that need an "oscar-worthy" script..especially on newgrounds of all places. duh.) anyhoooo. good luck with your future cartoons. who knows, if you're lucky, maybe i'll write an episode or two for you. :-P
pretty good ^^
I liked your use of humour in this, so random ^^ The Graphics were not that bad, plus the animation was pretty good too. Overall I liked it. Keep up the awesome work. A tip though, next time with the intro song.. Dont let it stretch for so long. It seemed to be out of sink with the speed of the rest of the cartoon ^^ But overall, an awesome job^^
a pretty good flash movie.. keep working on your drawings.. favorite part.. when apu sings.. and when the boss says.. animal and mojo thought he was talking to melvin.. keep workin on it kat!
I know you :P lol Thanks
Sorry, no sale.
As bad as your animation is, it will probably get better with time. I'm not too concerned about that. I think it's great that you're trying to make a series, I wish everyone the best if that's what they're trying to do. But come on, do you consider this a good cartoon?
None of the voices are memmorable and it sounded like none of your actors put any effort into the delivery.
The erratic 'random-style' jokes had no point to them and the overall story relied too heavily on awkward silences, "Remember the time when" lines and words like "Meh" and "Uh" that just don't count as dialogue.
I'm just giving it to you straight, This needs a lot of work.
Ahem, ok... your jokes are just as random as mine hypocrite. And your characters dont even walk. So go eat some cheese!
funny...not much more
I guess I should review it too, seeing as how I acted in it. The voices were superb, you got some of the Voice Acting Club's best voice talents, Hobbes and Kagome are awesome. That gave the sound high marks. It was funny, but the art/animation was...how do I put this? Bad. Mostly, try to spend more time on the animation and instead of drawing everything freehand with the pencil tool, use the paintbrush tool and zoom in a lot when you draw. That way you can have smoother lines and can add more detail. Other than that it was funny, made me laugh and the voices were great. It'll be fun to act in/see the next episode, just spend more time on it.
Thanks for the review, I'll send you the script for the second episode when its done :)
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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