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This is fantasy story using FF sprites, if you don't like sprites don't review it. It's pretty short but I think it deserves a place on Newgrounds. Thank you, and any suggestions or constructive criticism is welcome.
We've got a real winner here.. i mean..wow how do you have such good flash skills? Ugh....improve EVERYTHING! invisible boxes surrounding the people...ugh..low quality songs...1 hit fights...ugh. Watch FF: The New empire by Tootbook..there is an FF series to learn from...jesus christ...learn to spell.
So few good things about it.
Come to think of it, the only thing I really liked was the music. The movie lacked an original and interesting plotline. The sprites were imported without problems, but you didn't make them so I'm not giving you credit for that. The animation was slow and bland, consisting mostly of straight lines. The sound, although appropriate, were rare. There was a glitch in the dialogue where, on two separate occasions, you were sent back to the beginning of the movie instead of continuing the sequence. I think you can probably make something good if you use a better plot and more unique characters, and get rid of that glitch, but this particular movie is nothing but a waste of space.
First make a flash movie better than this one, then come and talk to me about plot.
well, yes it was short and u need to have a bit more fighting scenes with more action and better music than what ws playing in the backround it was to boring. When you get into a battle try putting like fast rock music in. That would get every1's attention!
Very good, but it could be longer
You have done a very good job, but the low scores were for its shortness and lack of Background music. I can give you some great Sprite and Music sites if you want.
Great what site?
Not bad for your first try...
Short, and if I was honest, a little sour, but still, it is only eoisode one. I think you have the right idea but there is room for improvement. I'm looking forward to number two, but please make it a little longer.
oh and befor I forget, nice job on the opening, that is one of your strong points.
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