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THis is a flash that I re-made with music sound more animation and the best of all VOICES!!!!!! It's based off a comic book series I made so its all good.
Didnt like it at all...
The voices did'nt go with the mouthes and I just want this to be blammed.
Well...... Thanks for the good review!
could use a lot of help...
it seems kind of over-done. animation could use some work. and the sound could use a LOT of work. it sounds like you're talking through a tin can.
Over done? Well, yes the animation could use some work but it's the first time I have drawn people; eyes mouths expressions on flash. And yes my Microphone is pretty bad.
Guess what? GUESS W00T?
I rated it a 0 (zero) isn't this a cool joke? well its funnier than the ones in the flash movie well improve and improve and improve
Harharhar! If only all of my jokes were that hilarious... Maybe... if I changed to wicked fast cars with wicked cool designs I'd be wicked cool too!
Not very good
I'm only reviewing because this reminds me of the first flash series I was trying to make. It kept getting blammed so I kept making it better. I wish this would have gotten blammed, not because I hated the flash, but so you would redo it, learn from your mistakes and make it better. I'm glad I got blammed a while back because now I realize that I have to keep improving. Also your jokes were so lackluster and boring. I didn't laugh but I think you could improve on that too.
Lies! My first one was blammed because there weren't any voices or sound, with even worse animatION.
Sorry, but this is the improved version. I'll put more time into the next one. I think.
u submitted this before but this has voiceovers......before u submit somethin put a little more effort improveing other things like Graphics
If you didn't notice, it's a Whole minute longer. All of that is pure entertaiment! If you can stand to watch it again, look for the little things, like moving eyes and elbows.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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