Score: 0
"Ok?"
date: July 5, 2005
I don't know what the point of that was. We're you trying to be funny? Or was this suppose to be sad? This is what I picked up: A guy watching a blank computer screen, loads a matrix program, and then gets smashed somehow? I made no sense to me..
For your future movies: Leave out all of the long pauses where the viewer is just staring at a still frame of a guy's head, or a computer screen. No one cares.
Your drawing was really bad, and I didn't see any diverse character movement - just tweens.
The first step to a movie is the story. So before you begin animating your next film, put a lot of time and thought into the story.
Better luck in the future.