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This is a part for a collab I'm doing, I just wanna see some feedback and if I should change anything. Review Fairly!
Its king david please dont submit ur fixed up version to NG because im gonna submit this colab to NG
Hi there. Red is here to give you a insanely long review like always. heh.
Nice concept. Very funny hit on the reality TV. I thought it was humorous. Not laugh myself till I piss my pants but it cracked a smile on my face.
The animation aand some of the graphics need work. It is awefully simplistic and with more dynamic angle and graphics the message could be even funnier. You may want to have someone who can do a good "coming to you this summer" guy kinda voice do the voice overs. The voice (yours?) is a way too mellow.
Hell I can do the voices for ya. I am the guy at school who can does all the cartoon voices ya know? just ask wayne_enterprises. He goes to my shcool... and lives at... haha just kidding Gary.
Even though it was a little short I still liked it.
It was pretty avrage, evena abit below.
The graphics were fine, they matched the style.
The style was pretty avrage, you had to build it a bit more, although it was very clear.
The sound was clear, but you could use some background audio.
It wasn't so funny, you had to make funny things accur while the trailer is happening and you had to make a punchline.
In the next time, thinkof a better script and make it longer
poking a grizzly with a stick is pretty stupid, so no wonder the bear was pissed off.
anyways, it was an alright short movie... or i guess a preview.
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