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First episode in the Martial Arts clay animated miniseries.
The story of an eager young white belt and his Super Amazing Ninja Master
What is this crap!
This just isnt good, I'm sorry but there isnt no humor and you could do somthing better. There's just not much to say here.
Personaly i dont like it but i think you have some potential in clay.
Just put humor in and you'll get more 5's and up.
make it funny
its really tedious with the claymation...sound was crap i cudnt understand half the time which is also bad because when i heard the voices the acting was done pretty well just take out the music.....if u were to put jokes in here or if u did i didnt hear em this cud be frontpage material
Good animation, at least...
I think you did a great job on the animation, but it wasn't very funny (which you could predict when the title combines "martial arts" and "gun").
great animation, bad sound
I couldn't understand what they were saying because the music drown them out!
I agree with the last reviewer, sound quality was poor. but you might simply fix it by stripping that cheezy music out and upping the volume of the voices a tiny bit
hope this helps! I think you have talent
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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