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right i decided as i finished the last one at a really stupid place that i would go back and do it properly so here you are, enjoy.
Youve submitted this 4 times?did u no tats against rules?u just edit it.go to flash tutorial itl tell u how to edit ONE.
its was pretty kwl i enjoyed it i love bloc party
hi big boy,
i thought it was bontastic keep workin hard u sexy hunk lol
no it was a gr8 movie i enjoyed it and the music went wll with it!
Don't do it, kid.
Graphics: Not bad. You could use some lessons in anatomy and perspective, but at least you drew something original. Animation is minimal, but you managed to pull it off. Minor glitch: Two of the windows were off after the first flash of lightning for some reason.
Style: This is why the lack of animation didn't hinder your graphics score as much as it could have. You did it in a monstage style that makes it work. If you'd tried to make them walking or something, it would have looked pathetic, but you just slid the images across the screen like an anime. If I didn't think emo kids were whiny losers, and antidepressants were overperscribed, I probabaly would have connected with the characters. As it was, most of this Flash's message pinged off my apathetic, chitinous shell of cynicism. I can tell you tried really hard to convey that message, though, and I think you did the best you could. The establishing shots of the house took a while, but he made them as interesting as he could, which is a good thing. Oh, and fading to black after the initial lightning flash was an AWESOME touch. :) Very cinematic.
Sound: Some song you never heard of by some artist you don't care about. Or maybe that's just me. Yeah... it's probabaly just me. Anyway, timing was good and sound effects were sparse but used to good effect.
Violence: Kids get shot. Not gratuitiously, but with purpose. IMHO: Bad premise, but good storytelling.
Humor: Self-pity movie.
Overall: Slightly below average. Then again, emo isn't my bag. I would like to see this author try to tell a longer, more complicated story. He seems to have a good directorial style, and a feel for how to influence mood and atmosphere.
Even though I gave it a 4, this Flash does not suck. It's just "challenging" to watch. It's not fun. It is well-executed, though, despite the artist's apparent skill level.
kk thansk alot for the really imformative review. im having trouble thinking of something to do for my nexxt movie email@example.com if youve got any ideas thanks alot
OMG man that flash relly spoke to me
hey man i loved it it really made me think for a while and loved the song too, damndoes other dudes cant even give a good comment anyways i tihnk it was great except one thing im not a fast reader hehe so i couldn't read the stuff completely but i read most of it so good job bro nicely done
yeah kk ill work on slowing down the text but it was fine for me but alot off people have been ssaying that so ill work on it thanks so much for the score
this sucked all around the worst animation ive seen on newgrounds
everything about this sucked
ok bit harsh but i dont care it went green
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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