it was very good for a first try

I thought u'd put alot of work into this for ur first try, unlike other ppl, u had all the effects that u said u'd put in , welldone. And with every other submission comes improvment.

I agree with OKChinaski

For a first submission, it looks really nice, and the sound is great.

The idea is a little played out, but whatever, congrats on your first entry!

fat stickz

last time i checked fat things with no arms dont move like that duhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

a good attempt at a cool fight scene.not very original though. a lot better than some of the first flashes that dont get blammed.

would be better with a plot or some better looking characters.

Ehh...

Try having a script with some real characters... You have enough skill to create a decent flash... Good luck on your next animation...

Cheers!
~RB

This is actually not that bad

If you learn how to do flash better, I bet this will be a great series!