Hi, this is the start to a series of mine. Hope you like it!
(I'm sorry for not crediting the music from my intro, I lost the original with the ID #)
EDIT: Well, I went over the reviews, so I was wondering if anyone wanted to help write the script for the next one, and do some voices. If your interested please e-mail me at speddyfeddy1234@yahoo.co
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((( ABIT SHORT )))
~~REVIEW~~
Well it has some good story behind it but was very short even for a first episode, didnt get a chance to know the characters, nice use of the whole view screen and good color all around, i liked it just needs to be longer...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and go into many more different scenes then what you had...
~~OVERALL~~
A very short start to what could be a nice series, nice work...
~X~
It's Alright...
It's ok... Very short and wasn't as funny as it could have been. But, If it is good enough for the rest of Newgrounds, it is good enough for me.
Good but too short!
Hah! and my brother says he has it tough!
It sure is, but I'm gonna be a freshman this year, YAY?
too short
For a opening episode there wasnt even much to get in it. In fact right when you had a plot going you cut it off. I was like WTF aint we supposed to learn who this guy is or somethen.
It was good just please put more lenght to it.
I'm sorry, I was really just pissed at myself for taking to long so I just cut off... :(
And...?
I understand it is a part of a series, but the opening episode was so bland and so dull that I honestly do not want to stay in tune for the upcoming episodes. Also, the voices of the adults is impossible to hear, and no, I'm not seventy.
Ok, I'll work on my scripts and have voice actors with natural low voices...