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Took me 4months for this lol. It's about 10mins long so grab some drinks. This is part 1 outta 2 of my final chapter of EgoCity. Part 2 will be out at the end of this year.
Still a classic.
I've been a fan since Chapter I. Of course, now I grade a heck lot harder than I used to, but lucky for you, it's still a pleasure to watch. I love the graphics. It's almost like art. The voice acting isn't great, but I actually LIKE it. It's unique. Like the previous chapters, sometimes it moved too fast, and some parts just had me confused about what's happening. I'm really excited about Chap V Disk 2, though, expecially after I've seen how much you've improved over the last 4 Chapters.
Wow- that was tacky.
All right. I know You've done multiple others before this, so I won't even mention the fact that I had NO IDEA what the hell was going on, seeing as I haven't seen any before this. I won't blast you on that. Other than that, the voice acting was simply horrendous. I simply cannot abide a story line- even if it is good (which it wasn't)- If the cheesy characters with their cheesy scripts and bad acting continually ruin it.
Even with all that aside, what this all boils down to is a tacky love-gone-bad story that would make a decent platformer, due to the "powerful orbs" that I guess he has to collect. It was good animation though. Sorry, but I can't give this one too good a score. Maybe in the next installment try some variation of voice actors, or maybe... acting to begin with? You have a very good animation style though- try again with something else, and i'm sure you'll succeed.
Other than the choppy voices, you really shown how powerful flash can really do in animations. Great job on the graphics
Although it was a brilliant idea. I think it was portrayed in a way that did it no justice. The story, although good, lacked organization. The whole time i didnt even know what was going on, except for the "you were in my dreams" There should be more emphasis and explaination (sp) on the orbs. So, clean up everything else, organize a bit. And i think you will have a brilliant flash.
You were in my Dreams, but not in Reality.
The highest R I can see giving you is a 1 maybe a 2 if your lucky. The only thing remotely good was music but only a few scenes really bleneded right with it. Graphics weren't great at all. I really didn't get anything going on till I had to think about what I was watching... Arg. Typical love drama crap... I liked the orb symbols if that makes you a bit delighted...
This is the story of a fearless girl and her encounter with the wicked cold wind god
Art school and religion aren't that different...
a short school assignment
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