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This is my first Flash. I guess its pretty elaborate, but hey, what am I to do? This was inspired by another Flash I saw. Maybe you can guess. I forgot. Btw, this is one big Flash! (3 megs) phone line Beware!
Various Issues but Overall good
Not so great on animation and it's kind of messy when you're looking into the brain, like some parts that you want to see more go too fast and parts that arent that important go to slow
But this is a super awesome concept, and I think it would do fabulously if it was redone after more knowledge was attained about flash
The animation was pretty poor and the message could've been shown in a less obvious way but I liked the whole 'going into the brain' then 'coming back out' thing. Gave a real dimension to the homeless guy and makes you think differently.
pretty good for your first flash
its really moving
the animation was not very well done but as you said this was your first flash so its only natural.
wife- she apparently was murdered
dreams- kind of confusing
now i did all that to say this
birth- confusing!! he was driving his wife and his new baby home from the hospital when another car came out of nowhere and hit them. he and his wife died, we know not of what happened to the baby, and he is still begging. how could he beg if he was dead?! two people were put under the sheet... the people that were in the front seat; the man and his wife. they were both put under the blanket.... unless that the man was his son, his daughter in law, and his grandbaby and if that was the case, you should have made it a little more clear.
29 cents won't solve problems
I hate to say it, but it's true. Here in my city, the homeless come right up to you and ask you for money which will be applied to booze. "Spare me a dollar for a beer?"
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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