YAY!

WOW THIS IS GOOD!

That was neat

That guy was cool And a nice lil poem too. Didnt make since but i like the chick that sounds like a demon. hehehe.

Not Bad.

That was good while it lasted. It could be longer. There was no plot.

not bad

not a bad piece over all. i like it. cant find any thing to critique on. so keep up the good work.

Cool

Loved the part with the squares and the notes, good stuff man keep it up