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"Overcooked and Underpaid"
In this 50s satire, Mr. Chadwick's boss is coming over for lunch, but gets a terrible surprise; hilarity ensues!
dude. i saw what you wrote on thefilthcartoons web site about this flash but im sorry i didnt liked it. i think its kinda boring. sorry.
Okay now that this is long gone off the front page and everything I have decided to review this submission
Its jokes are a bit corny but that doesnt matter for some reason this cartoon is very addictive it may be how you have drawn the characters I dont know the sounds were also funny especially the sound effect of the ball hitting the boss's head it was just like one of those 50's show wih really crap sound effects
One thing that made me laugh was the neighbour how he was introduced with the canned cheering its like one of those comedys when a character with hardly any lines and place comes in to the show and everyone likes him
Now for the last line this is very good and you must make more
This flash is...
1. Under cooked
That wasn't funny, much less the part where the woman appears with a black eye. Why should it be funny?
Nice style and graphics man! atleast on the characters, but the houses were a bit hard. Nice music, loved the intro, just that kind of old style that makes you feel happy.. But the rest was crap, bad story, and the laughter in the background? cut that off, it sucked. Just annoying. Nice ending tough, vere clithcy =).
But overall it was middle plus. So i gave you a 3.
story is a bit overdone. but it is good, that is why it is done so much. show us one more matt
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