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I made this for a Uni assignment. It's my first real movie. Please tell me what you think.
Grade = Distinction = 75%
I will respond to every review. So please comment.
that was a nice animation.... hope you got a good grade in this in your university class. i hope to see some more flash work from you, you got a good eye for making good animations.
Thanks a lot mate. I'll make more in the future.
i liked it. it was cool how you got it to look like a commercial. the only advice is to try and fix the audio. there was a fuzzy sound where im coming from. also are they gay, because what sreight guy dances in a room with no girls, seriously. anyways hope to see more soon
Well you did only see a portion of the room. And besides, boobs are hard to animate lol. And yes, I know I need a new mic. I should have used the recording booth at uni. I was just too slack. Thanks
((( NEAT )))
Neat commercial, i liked the drawings, and graphics in this animation a lot you can tell you put good effort into making this, i liked how the ninja comes in spinning the beer, and give it to the king. The sound was good, and you animated your scenes well with the sound effects, i also like the way you made this into a commercial, and the way you try to get people to drink it...
Thanks a lot. Crown Is my favorite beer, so in a way, I also wanted to promote it on newgrounds. Thanks for the review. Drink Crown :)
=) 3 out of 5
nice. good little flash. i take it your austrailian. everything was good except the sound good thing you had subtitles or i wouldnt have understood it. keep it up. 3 out of 5
Yeah i'm an Aussie. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.
YAY BOOZE. Anyway, I liked the concept (ninja delivery of booze? Sign me up plz), and the graphics were surprisingly good. Even if the king does have two right hands. Also the second musical bit with the pillar-dodging part was a little out of place, but other than that the sound was good.
Heh, yeah the hand was wierd. Someone already picked that up. Thanks for the review.
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