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an embelishment on my favorite scene in the movie... please review
The only part i laughed at was the beginning because it looked like he was tap dancing.Put more effort into your work and you might want to sharpen up you talking animation.
you made a good thing a bit short and not much of a story line but your anamation it getting better you will be relly good one day
did you copy the eyes of yoda bob
no i didn't copy yoda bob. i didn't watch yoda bob until after i had submitted my movie already
This short just died in the middle. No action, just the Emperor(I'm assuming that's who that was) thinking for several seconds and then the screen going to "The End". But, there is potential here. Take the time to work some more on this short and improve it.
this was cool. a good flash! just need to work on some sound affects like one skywalker was scratching hid head and made that odd noise! but other than that it was good :)
It was decent.
To be quite honest, I didn't know what exactly the fuck was going on during half of that. But anyway... to the review.
Graphics: They were alright. I've seen better, and I've seen worse. You should try improving them in your future movies. I liked the design of the youngling, though, but it was still very rough.
Style: This was ruined by shape tweens. They are *not* pretty. I felt that this would have been a lot better without them. You could have put a fading effect or something in place (I think). Just fix that in future, too. And I didn't like the look of Anakin's walk. Don't just scale him from side to side in the future.
Sound: I love the Darth Vader metal theme. That's really what got you the high rating for "sound". The voice of the youngling was very hard to hear, I had to turn my sound right up to hear him properly. I don't know what you could do to fix that.
Violence: I'm assuming he force pushed the kid out the window. That's why the "1" for violence. You could've at least shown a lightsaber :( I mean, what's Star Wars without lightsabers?
Interactivity: There was a "play" and a "replay" button. You expected a higher rating? :P
Humor: You get the "5" just for the sheer randomness of it all. Not the funniest thing I've seen, but not the least.
Overall, it was good, but it could've been improved. If you'd spent more time on the drawings, and getting the effects right, this could've been a lot better. Next time, fix your animations, try and get the sound better quality and try to use some decent effects.
Best of luck.
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