cool one
it was a very good first animation.... and a good overall movie, but i didn't really understand the whole plot to it 100%. oh well, great work, hope to see some more from you.
Author Comments
This flash was made in one day for a school project on Java so it's not exactly the funniest thing ever.
This is the first flash I've made so I'm pretty happy with it but I'm going to make another flash which of course will take a bit longer gonna put real effort in it.
RampantLion responds:
Yea I can understand that basically the only people that could get this movie is people from my computer class but thanks for the review
((( NICE )))
Umm its nice, and i like how you teach Billy all about computers, but you could have put some more comedy into it, its nice, but more comedy would have been nicer. The sound is good, and i liked the voices in this. The style you went for looked smooth, and good effort you put into this...
~X~
It was great then... ouch
The tirade at the end nearly blasted me out of my seat because the sound volume suddenly went through the roof... but otherwise I like the animation. It was clean and the characters well drawn. The sound was also clear and the comedy central skit in the middle was an appreciated bit of humour thrown in.
RampantLion responds:
The volume of the last line was a big regret but we made this movie in a day so we had to corners and take what we could get, but thanks for the review
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this was very good ! you forgot to place a ";" though :p
Good work
Good to see some people make good first flashes. I found this funnier as a Java programmer, too, which helped. Improvement suggestions: put in more animation, make the pace a little quicker.
Good job.