I Was working on about 4 or 5 flash movies but they all came out pretty bad so I quit making those and I got the idea of making a monk fight a samurai..
Got this done in about 3 days.... I think it looks kind of crappy cause it came out 10 times better in my head..
Hate it or like it but please vote fairly!
(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
Ok, interesting idea for this movie. I really liked the music, as I felt it went well. The ending was kind of surprising to me, which was good.
^^Needs Improving^^
Not really sure whether I like this or not. The animations definitely need to be improved. Make them a lot smoother. Maybe some color in this would have helped as well. Also, work on developing the storyline more. Either that or just animate the fight scene so that it is more interesting.
ok could of made this alot better
ok, overall not a bad flash considering it was made in 3 days, when i saw the title i was hoping for something a little more epic though instead of some white lines going across a black screen and then comming back to the samurai being dead.. but id like to point something out, monks dont use weapons they are highly trained in the martial arts so him using a sword didnt really make much sense to me and i dont think monks are christian.
Uh.
Was the monk christian? and why did he kill himself in the end?
why did the monk kill himself?
i was expecting a little more from a title like that but it was OK (except for the monk killing himself at the end that pissed me off)
You show promise
Im Impressed, compared to some other Flashes ive seen, for a 1st or 2nd Flash this shows really good potential, just take your time and you could probably make some really good flashes, Though it was somewhat difficult at first to understand i figured out the 'storyline' after a minute or two, keep up the great work
