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Jun 9, 2005 | 5:57 AM EDT
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** Notice: Text will fly by fast! So read faster! **
** Warning! Some scenes might be found Very disturbing to some. **

15/04/09 More News: It's still happening.

05/08/06 Additional News: I've updated the file with a new one. New fonts, less faulty grammar and replaced the old Lilium *opening version* song with the extended one. The transfer went... Swell. =) Please have a look.

Edit: Ok... Things are going too far. I had no IDEA where this submission would end up after posting it here on Newgrounds. And honest to God, I am overwhelmed by the response that I've got. I try to keep up with the reviews and mails that you send me. And if you sent a mail and I havn't responded, I am sorry... There are just so many. T.T

Based on the amount of reviews, I feel there is need for some (even further) explanation of stuff:
1. Some of you feel that the story is lacking and has no real substance. I understand this, since I had to cut it short because of the length of the song (which I had to edit and generaly murder to make it twice as long). The text fly by fast because of the same problem.
2. And as for the gory part... I try to keep open minded about things in the world and I dont get upset easily... Things I find minor offensive, others might find alot worse. And if you open your eyes a bit you'll realize that things like these actually DO happen.
3. Lilium... She's a special girl. Try to have that in mind before you judge her.
4. The Shadow and the Brother... There's a reason why he wanted her brother the way he was.
5. I didnt have any political thoughts with this movie... Whatever happens in the movie does not have anything to do with my political views on anything. Its just a story.
6. I am not a Goth. I am not Emo. I just like writing stories. I hate being labeled.
7. I did write the dialogue... Though it was a very bold move since I've never rhymed in all my life and English isnt my native language. (I'm Swedish for those who are curious.)
8. The song is from the Anime, Elfen Lied. At first when I saw the anime I was a bit stunned. But I loved it in a non-sadistic way (if that's possible). Some of you say my story is identical (or near it) to Elfen Lied's story... Which I find odd. Only similarity might be the excessive violence, other than that... No.

9. ... I am working on a sequel... And it will be alot different from this one.

*End of Edit*

This is my first Flash creation ever and it took about 4 days to complete. I had never before seen Flash in action so I pretty much learned as I went by... Never before have I sceamed that much and cried because the software didnt work with me... Still the thing came out pretty ok.
There isnt really any "animation" in this piece... Its more of a slideshow of sorts, telling of a very important event in the young girl, Lilium's, life.
The main thought of the movie was for it to work as a presentation for my RPG character (regular D&D style... Paper and Pen)... There are some written dialogue in there... Read fast! The script was longer than the song would alow... Enjoy!

P.S
Promise my next uploads will contain alot more animation and alot more action. ^^d

Reviews


Grengar-Bone-FiendGrengar-Bone-Fiend

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

emmm

well the animation was exceptional but the plot itself and the whole aiming for wickedness seems pretty over done it seems like you tried to hard



Raiv-XombyRaiv-Xomby

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Good talent, bad flash

This was an attempt at deep an meaningful gothic art, but it just sucked. There is no story interest. The storyline itself is vague and gives rise to base questions that doesn't make me want to know more. The character list offers no protagonist and as such I don't give a shit what happens to any characters in the story. This doesn't appeal to any type of interest that a story should appeal to. The script lanugage is written in prose like ways, but it is pseudo-poetic at best. The whole storyline and concept is a massive flop thus making this flash a worse hype than Numa Numa.

You can draw well, though.

Make an animation where the characters actually move and the plot is less vague and more interesting. You don't deserve any awards.



Insane-IngusInsane-Ingus

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Well... ehm... That actually sucked, you know?

Of course, I ant say that the graphics or the music wasn't good, because it was very well done. The storyline's the problem. The girl's doings resemble those of Ana(l)kin Skyshmocker in this #*@% movie. Kill my parents? Sure! Come on! This is just so ridiculous! Next time, work on a better story, because it was the only thing missing here.



meta-yoshimeta-yoshi

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

um ... oooooookay

how this ended up on the number 1 spot I will never know. I can see it in the top fifty but number one not sure confusing to say the least.



anvoiceanvoice

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

disturbing...

Not to offend anyone... The graphics were good, truly, it was a good animation. But there is enough disturbing sh*t out there, and yours being able to compete for the title of most fucked up does not make it good. When you can make a good animation WITHOUT having to revert to primitive mystification and disturbing scenes, I will be the first to compliment it. Current verdict, - well animated crap.