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Jun 9, 2005 | 5:57 AM EDT
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** Notice: Text will fly by fast! So read faster! **
** Warning! Some scenes might be found Very disturbing to some. **

15/04/09 More News: It's still happening.

05/08/06 Additional News: I've updated the file with a new one. New fonts, less faulty grammar and replaced the old Lilium *opening version* song with the extended one. The transfer went... Swell. =) Please have a look.

Edit: Ok... Things are going too far. I had no IDEA where this submission would end up after posting it here on Newgrounds. And honest to God, I am overwhelmed by the response that I've got. I try to keep up with the reviews and mails that you send me. And if you sent a mail and I havn't responded, I am sorry... There are just so many. T.T

Based on the amount of reviews, I feel there is need for some (even further) explanation of stuff:
1. Some of you feel that the story is lacking and has no real substance. I understand this, since I had to cut it short because of the length of the song (which I had to edit and generaly murder to make it twice as long). The text fly by fast because of the same problem.
2. And as for the gory part... I try to keep open minded about things in the world and I dont get upset easily... Things I find minor offensive, others might find alot worse. And if you open your eyes a bit you'll realize that things like these actually DO happen.
3. Lilium... She's a special girl. Try to have that in mind before you judge her.
4. The Shadow and the Brother... There's a reason why he wanted her brother the way he was.
5. I didnt have any political thoughts with this movie... Whatever happens in the movie does not have anything to do with my political views on anything. Its just a story.
6. I am not a Goth. I am not Emo. I just like writing stories. I hate being labeled.
7. I did write the dialogue... Though it was a very bold move since I've never rhymed in all my life and English isnt my native language. (I'm Swedish for those who are curious.)
8. The song is from the Anime, Elfen Lied. At first when I saw the anime I was a bit stunned. But I loved it in a non-sadistic way (if that's possible). Some of you say my story is identical (or near it) to Elfen Lied's story... Which I find odd. Only similarity might be the excessive violence, other than that... No.

9. ... I am working on a sequel... And it will be alot different from this one.

*End of Edit*

This is my first Flash creation ever and it took about 4 days to complete. I had never before seen Flash in action so I pretty much learned as I went by... Never before have I sceamed that much and cried because the software didnt work with me... Still the thing came out pretty ok.
There isnt really any "animation" in this piece... Its more of a slideshow of sorts, telling of a very important event in the young girl, Lilium's, life.
The main thought of the movie was for it to work as a presentation for my RPG character (regular D&D style... Paper and Pen)... There are some written dialogue in there... Read fast! The script was longer than the song would alow... Enjoy!

Promise my next uploads will contain alot more animation and alot more action. ^^d



Rated 5 / 5 stars

i love it

i think its beautiful, in a dark sense but hey i dont care i still like it and if enyone has a problem with that then kiss my ass and go fuck your self


Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice work

It was good to see something a little different than most submissions, and I hope you decide to make a part two


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very nice and artistic, there is potential there

reminds me of edger allen poe, with a little Lovecraft and a dash of stephen king. the music and poem went perfectly together.
part of me wants to know why the girl would kill her family for no apparent reason other than a stranger asked her, but the rest of me says that it is irrelevent why she did it, but i really want to know what will happen next. also will she become a vampire or somthing, for vampires have no shadows and pale skin. i am also despreat to see what happens next.
this is a great piece of art, not what is usualy found here on NG, and IMO it is in a class of its own. great job and make a sequal.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

creepy-entertaining-damn good

you all have style commin out ur ass that is the MOST originial thing every that was good. ending seems to be leading to sequel yes!?! highest reccomendation!!! i quote Puff Daddy" vote (5) or DIE!!" =D

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

Well...Its a style...

I liked it...You need alot of imagination...At begening I tought it was Fatpie, totally his style. I gave you 5/5 because I know you have talent. I just need to ask why you do such morbid things this is wierd enough to light questions in me. Do you think you could do more living things in future? Because the animations and rymes and so on were asweome the only thing is that morbid doesnt bring joy to peoples.... Consider im not a 60 years old guy who wanna bring joy in the world, I just know you can do things funnyer and nicer ( can we say that... ) that this.

Keep up the excellent work, Bart_Ddev who knows ur good.

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