Score: 8

"it was ok....."

by: evil-kitty20

date: February 25, 2007

it was a little too disgusting for my taste,but that is just me. this wasn't your best work,i'll admit,i mean the jokes were really not that funny.....but it was still good.

Score: 8

"YES!"

by: Gam30v3r

date: August 18, 2006

This was great as usual death to that scinny bastard the best part was the toxic gae XD

Score: 8

"Hu??"

by: Pokoa

date: June 2, 2006

I dont rilly get this but its funey non the less

Score: 7

"Not bad"

by: Soulless-Enterprises

date: June 2, 2006

This video is good for the animation. The "story" i guess, goes well with the animation, not bad, it's alright. I would advise you to work more for the humor, it was funny, but not delightfully funny. Keep working at, good job.

Score: 1

"Crap. Just Plain Crap."

by: lordofcheese1

date: June 2, 2006

I haven't watched the first one, but after seeing this, i have to say this is one of the most sucky flashes ever. But, im not saying you can't do better. I'm sorry, I don't usually rate zero, but my gosh: I couldn't help it. It is crap, but, I will list some things that you could improve on below:

Humor
Style
Use Thicker Outlines
Better Graphics
Better Sounds
The Violence Wasn't Really Good, If Thats What Your Aiming For
Better Punch Lines

Here is some of my advice:
Try to create a sieres of something completly different that no one has tried before. Maybe even make random flashes of things that just pop up in your head. Maybe you can make all your flashes parodys.

This is all my review has to say, and I hope this will help you improve your flash thinking. - lordofcheese1